Everytime i read the issue, i find numerous more mistakes and ways i would have mad eit better. :p
Dear Silica, the response overall is superlative, but at time it appear as if you are trying to be overambitious with figurative usages. In order to build the rhetoric, you have used several places, which fail to communicate exactly what you intend to communicate. Other glaring error that occurred at the very beginning of the response is the use of double superlatives "most highest". Just avoid such kind of errors and this will be just superb.
Yes, introspection is the key to perfection. Keep striving!