Heyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank u sir. n of course i'l improve better next time.
Barinder, I must say that you have derived a very interesting conclusion for this question. This is not what is usually inferred from this prompt. But whatever it is, I find it interesting. If you take care of the logistics of your writing, i.e, spellings, punctuation and structure, this is bound be a beautiful piece of writing.
Yes Barinder, that's the spirit. Just strive for excellence.