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Sandeep. considering that you need a very high score for writing, there are two things which need to be mentioned to begin with. First, the first letter in the first word of each sentence must be capitalized. The pronoun "I", must also be capitalized. Third, your indentations are not necessary. While there is a convention to indent the beginning of a paragraph, for TOEFL it is not needed and your indentations are to big, they should be 5 spaces and no more. You make a number of good points, but I think you need to expand on some of these. For instance, specifically who would you chat with? What would you specifically download? What movies? What else would you download? What other ways would you use it to pass time? Specifically, how would you use it for your studies and finally what pictures would ou have on it?