Brigade I don't think is appropriate to use as this is a military term, furthermore this second sentence is very unclear. Up until you started discussing books, the writing is very unclear and not making much sense. After this point, your essay is more developed, structured and relevant. There are however many word usage errors as well as grammatical which make it difficult to read.
Brigade I don't think is appropriate to use as this is a military term, furthermore this second sentence is very unclear. Up until you started discussing books, the writing is very unclear and not making much sense. After this point, your essay is more developed, structured and relevant. There are however many word usage errors as well as grammatical which make it difficult to read.