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Palwinder, Puneet, and Jaswinder, Thank you for submitting your essays here. These are fairly clear. Palwinder, this essay has definitely shown improvement. Jaswinder, your essay is clear and easy to follow. Puneet, this is not a bad attempt. Trust me, you will get better as you continue with the course. Overall, there are usage issues, missing articles and general mistakes in grammar. We will discuss these issues on Monday. I want each of you to focus your attention to the grammar section of your texts. In order to write effectively, one needs to follow the rules outlined in this section. I urge you to practice writing at home. Take the topics from the IS list as well as from the writing list and write and essay each day. Compare your essay with the rules of grammar in the texts so that you have a better idea of your mistakes. You three are doing good otherwise. Sincerely Martin TOEFL Instructor

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Jaswinder Singh

Thank you Sir :)